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Reviews For: Me In 5 Paragrahs

Aelfin
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseOh this is rather good! Much much more interesting than any assignementi've ever written in fact :P

Anyway for someone claiming to be a 'novice' at writing i'd say this is fantastic :)

and thanks for reviewing my poem... not sure its really all that good, just one of my little 'moments' XD

Aefi
HJR
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI couldn't but smile while I was reading this gratifying piece. I really liked how you moved from one point to another in a rather spontaneous way while still relating them to your main subject...
I also loved the last paragraph ('me in 5 paragraphs or 20 words. However you choose to look at it') Brilliant..!
Thanks for bringing us a smile :)
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