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| Firefly's Locket 2008-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseA bit slower than some of your other stories, but I'm so excited to see you writing! YaY! ^_^ I caught some missed commas and one or two other mistakes but nothing horrid. I love you~! Please write more if you can. |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, I like this so far. You had a couple of spelling mistakes - their instead of they're - but I think it's fairly realistic. Or at least, as shameful as it is to admit it my parents are rather like Manda's. But yeah, good job. :D |