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| massattraction 2008-02-12 ch 1,   | NICE JOB. I really like the way you've managed to sum the whole affair up into a tanka, Ive tried to write asian poetry, so i know how difficult it can be, keeping it all really short. I especially like the "broken buttons sins:" Im not sure why, but that line really speaks. |
| Kartoffel on Canvas 2008-01-17 ch 1, | This is so strait forward, and yet I keep coming back to it again and again. |
| SheridanSpence 2008-01-17 ch 1, | I love your diction. This is a great piece...concise and powerful. |
| Searching4Truth 2008-01-14 ch 1, | Nice job! You say quite a bit with few words, and your word choice in relation to the subject matter fits very well, at least in my opinion. :-) P.S. Thanks so much for your helpful feedback on my poem! Your suggestions definitely improved it. |