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| demonsdisciple 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseHaha I'm not sure if this poem was supposed to be a bit darker than it came across as, but it made me laugh. I like the image of the "then" being on her tongue. I've been going through your poems, and you are very talented. Each one is unique and clever. I hope you publish a book of poetry one day. |
| Falcon0Rider 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one. :D It made me laugh, actually. Good one, Shadow. Falcon |
| Finwe 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL I don't know if there's another meaning to this poem, or if it was just for fun, but it's really cute! I enjoyed reading it, and it got a laugh out of me. Another job well done! |