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| adsaige 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abusealready? jeez, i wish i had your confidence. this is true. ♥ |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseIf you want her so bad... badly I love the chronology of the poem... to how you know through his eyes then how you actually know and then what you want him to do and what he will do... it flows really nicely I also love the part about respecting you enough to say that you've fallen out of love.. thats a great line.. as is the ending line... awesome piece |