wow. god. this is really good. i have that same problem. -well, i dont have someone to say 'i love you' but i hate how 'love' is so overused, and how i overuse it, and how it really means nothing anymore.

"I swear/they beat/for you." brilliant.

Talented Trish (:

aw, how sweet. i like it.

You amaze me, you can say so much, yet write so little, if that makes any sort of sense?
Hayley Elizabeth.

I like it. The raw feeling to it... no bother to describe the situation and yet absolutely raw, naked thoughts. Brilliant! (As always.)
xox
Saralisa

Agreed short and sweet, sometimes they're the better poems. Keep it Up!

Amazing. Sweet and to the point. Captured my heart with very little words. Beautifully written.