That was pretty epic even without having 20 pages. It was freaky and I loved it.

HOORAH! You should get back to this as soon as possible.

And when do I get to glance over that super secret nanowrimo story?

It's definitely creepy, but I'd like to see more if you have more to offer.

It is very well written and grabs the reader's attention quickly; nice work.

-stix-

Aw, I liked it D: