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Reviews For: Dive Into The Heart

felicia13
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI like your use of "unrealising" instead of other, less imaginative words. Hooray!

Overall, I like this. It's very bright and, in my mind, colorful. If words were colors... Anyway, it's quite nice.

Felicia.
Princess-anna57
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuse:) Great jorio! Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^
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