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| felicia13 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI like your use of "unrealising" instead of other, less imaginative words. Hooray! Overall, I like this. It's very bright and, in my mind, colorful. If words were colors... Anyway, it's quite nice. Felicia. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuse:) Great jorio! Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |