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| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseLove it! So well written! And the last line was Brilliant! I love how you repeated the line "We were so in love" through out the poem! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseYou have a good start, but if you are going to rymn I'd suggest setting up a rymn scheme to follow. Other than that I do think you have a really nice start. |