ha, I wonder what mr. d. would think of this analogy? nice job.

i love the parallel. last stanza is gorgeousness.

the rock heart comparison is really interesting and beautifully written.. especially the ending... awesome piece

very good. I liked the whole metaphor and everything. Keep it up!

Faith

Cool. Very good.

-Flare

i think you mean "than" instead of "that", but this was lovely ]] i hope those hearts do turn to a beautiful color of dust. ]

Wow. This was amazing, considering how much I can relate to it. Recently, I've been going through a tough time in my life, and sometimes, hearts are like pliant rocks, but... sometimes, they don't snap into shape. Amazing job. I can relate to this incrediby well.

ahh a very fun poem, i like it