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| Momiji K. Sohma 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseSo much emotion, I wish I could hug you. D: |
| Galadh Niniel 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWell said. I know this feeling, but eventually the pain will have an end, as you have said in your review as well. ;-) |
| Yusuf 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseAgain it amazes me how our lives are so alike. Pain has no end, tired of the hurt, so giving up. Nicely written ~Yusuf |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the last line and the whole idea of hiding beauty... nicely done |
| sweets555 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOne thing I'd like to point out, you spelt tired wrong. Otherwise, great message. Really, I liked it. Great job! |