 kloun mannequin 2008-09-17 . chapter 1that's true, when a person is hurt, they hide it with a mask but people don't notice that.
good poem. |
 Momiji K. Sohma 2008-05-15 . chapter 1So much emotion, I wish I could hug you. D: |
 Galadh Niniel 2008-05-01 . chapter 1Well said. I know this feeling, but eventually the pain will have an end, as you have said in your review as well. ;-) |
 Yusuf 2008-02-26 . chapter 1Again it amazes me how our lives are so alike. Pain has no end, tired of the hurt, so giving up. Nicely written
~Yusuf |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-15 . chapter 1I love the last line and the whole idea of hiding beauty... nicely done |
 sweets555 2008-01-14 . chapter 1One thing I'd like to point out, you spelt tired wrong. Otherwise, great message. Really, I liked it. Great job! |
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