:D haha. love it so far! :P
hope u update soon! :D :D :D

the story's going great... definitely had my interest in the first two chapters, can't wait for the next chaper!

Yayay! I'm so glad you did a sequel! It's really good so far; I can't wait for you to finish it! P.S. How long do you think this will be? Thanks for the great story!
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I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

I'm excited to read about their past.
I hope we'll see some of Jack and Avery in later chapters :)

I'm liking it so far. Especially liking the fact that it's Jasmine telling the story. It's different. At least to me it is. Keep up the good work and hope to see it updated soon. ^_^

love it :)
i hope jack comes out a lot in it!
& i love the way you wrote it.
past and present together. very good.
:)

Woo hoo!Pete and Jasmine's story..Nice!

I just finished Avery Sanders is not an A**, and I totally loved it!! I'm glad that you are doing a sequel (or maybe it's a prequel(?), and so far, it seems really interesting. Will it continue to be before Jack meets Avery? I was hoping to see some cameo appearances of Avery as well. Anyway, please update soon!

my interest is definitely piqued by this story, but is it really necessary to have it be a story within a story? it makes things seem a little less vibrant and intriguing..

OHMYGOD! You're doing a sequel!! ALL HAIL YOU!! Update soon..im way too curious and excited :)
good luck with this!

interesting! just finished reading A.S.S is not an ** today. didn't review, but it was good. update soon!

I like it alot. Actually to be quite honest I think one of the best parts of is when she gets interrupted (sp?) while telling the story. That part is something different and unique that you don't see in most of these stories. Update soon?

Cool...I have a question...is it going to be about the past or the rest of the story will be in the present...where Avery's story ended?
I liked the scene by the pool...Like Jasmine flirted with Collin and stuff, poor Jack, must be hard for him haha

Yay the Shanaham family is back! :)
I'm so glad...I loved Avery's story and I bet this will be one hell of a story too. Pete was always my favourite, his remarks and his cockiness haha And Jasmine is a cool character too...I liked her story...sounds interesting...I'd like to have a hot guy in my room too lol