I liked this a lot. This is my one of my favourite times in history, I love finding this sort of thing. I do hope you will continue.

Lovely! It read like the Heptameron. I like the antiquated way of speaking, really brought out the setting.

If you do have time, then please write more, though I did notice you said this work is finished.

Interesting that you wrote his name as Francois since I always saw it as Francis in history books.

One point of criticism, since you Frenchified everything else, like the names and some of the commands, why not the modes of address, like king and lady? Just for consistency, you know?

Very nice.