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| J.K.Ellis 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseAlthough its story is a smidge too emo for my tastes, the poem itself is pretty and the use of rhyme is much appreciated. It also flows quite smoothly. |
| Shades Of A Tulip 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful. I love it a lot. Don't bother with too many on my poems. None of them are as good as yours. I just like describing things. Haha. But, if you are going to read a poem, read Catching Perfection or a short story. Beach is a continuing story, but if you can, read it. I'm a little stuck. Thanks, and I love your work. |