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| painted eyes 2008-06-02 ch 1,  | abuseI like how it sort of connected nature and religion... Keep up the good work! ~painted |
| 123454321 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuse'heavens' should have an apostrophe in it. It is possessive. The last line is cliche; as you said in your summary, religious, but used frequently. -J.A. Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile). |
| Ygg 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseNice play on the religious aspects of sin! I like the comparison with raindrops. Great work! Keep up the good work! |
| VegasGoddess 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... you're not that religious and I certainly am not, but... I liked this. It was good. Makes you think, and makes you think DEEPLY. Very nice. Very very nice indeed. ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| TT-da-lamanite 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusea feeling of wanting to be purified raidates throughout, along with hope. Thanks for the review by the way. |
| Basara 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusepurified... nice... |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the religious perspective you've put on it! Well done! ~Daughter of Music |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseyou've been listening to leeland i assume. they have a song called, "tears from the saints". the lyrics go, "there are tears from the saints falling down on heavens' gates. this is an emergency. this is an emergency." it's a pretty song. this reminded me of that. |
| Michelladora 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusethis is gorgeous. wow, just wow. |
| Dextera 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful because of the amount of interpretation that can come from it. It allows the reader to ponder, and yet has striking imagery for so few words. Congratulations on such a wonderful piece and thanks for the review on "Answers." ;D |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abusewow, that was really good. it was a bit religious, but not too bad. nice work! |