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| Ramenluver 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseGood as always, hon. Keep writing. ^ ^ -Ramen |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Well done! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| J.K.Ellis 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseSimple, concise, and FINALLY a Fictionpress author who can write with a good rhyme scheme, though I would love to see some capitalization and punctuation. But anyway this is a breath of fresh air. |