Whoa, I really like this. Did you purposely use 'as' instead of '**', 'sit' instead of '**', and 'btch' instead of '**?' Good job, though.

pretty coolio

take thatt!!

OMG! Matt is such a jerk!

wow that was so sad. usually i hate these kinds of endings but it actually works and i really liked the whole story. good work! :)

aw
its so sad

matt is such a son of a bi*. sophia deserves someone so much better

the story was short but well written :) matt's such an a hole!

thats super sad. i feel bad for sophia. thats what popularity turns you into!! i dont know why people care about that stuff all the time, just be who you are and if they like you GREAT! if not, oh well!

thats harsh! Matt is such a meanie

im in love with this
story even though
it short, this chapter did
make me cry. it really sad.
im dying for ur sequel=D

Yay! A sequel!
Can't wait to read more. Many say that sequels are usually not as good as the previous story. Hopefully yours isn't one of them. Update soon!

Hm it's interesting and not a bad start too. I'll be looking forward to your sequel to this story. :)

oh that is so sad
but damn idiot matt
i assume the sequal takes place like...years later?


izzie

I loved the ending.
Woah, it was drama, drama, drama.
Stupid Matt.
Although, I do feel kinda bad for him.
Can't wait to read the sequel.