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| writer209 2008-09-03 ch 4,  | abusewow that was so sad. usually i hate these kinds of endings but it actually works and i really liked the whole story. good work! :) |
| muchmusiclove 2008-06-30 ch 4, | abuseaw its so sad |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abusematt is such a son of a bi*. sophia deserves someone so much better |
| lilswtmai 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abusethe story was short but well written :) matt's such an a hole! |
| lilswtmai 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abusethats super sad. i feel bad for sophia. thats what popularity turns you into!! i dont know why people care about that stuff all the time, just be who you are and if they like you GREAT! if not, oh well! |
| lilswtmai 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusethats harsh! Matt is such a meanie |
| helplessly in love 2008-02-12 ch 4, | abuseim in love with this story even though it short, this chapter did make me cry. it really sad. im dying for ur sequel=D |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-02-11 ch 4, | abuseYay! A sequel! Can't wait to read more. Many say that sequels are usually not as good as the previous story. Hopefully yours isn't one of them. Update soon! |
| animefreakgirl 2008-02-09 ch 4, | abuseHm it's interesting and not a bad start too. I'll be looking forward to your sequel to this story. :) |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-02-09 ch 4, | abuseoh that is so sad but damn idiot matt i assume the sequal takes place like...years later? izzie |
| kurstin.burstin 2008-02-09 ch 4, | abuseI loved the ending. Woah, it was drama, drama, drama. Stupid Matt. Although, I do feel kinda bad for him. Can't wait to read the sequel. |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseHi! Great chapter! i cant wait to see what happens at prom. hehe,i'm kinda hoping the story has a sad ending..lol well,its your story,not mine. Update soon! |
| animefreakgirl 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseStory isn't bad and I totally enjoyed it...Sophia was right about all the things she said about Matts' so called friends and well I hope he now realizes that he was wrong and she was right but I doubt now that after she said that to him and all, that she will ever talk to him again unless she gives in. Anyways I'll be looking forward to your next chapter and keep writing more I'm really interested. :) |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abusewell well well someone's probably feeling REALLY stupid right now *cough*matt*cough* as for the rest of the chapter it was good there were a lot of random mistakes like mistaken words and some spelling mistakes but if you go through it thoroughly once, it's an almost guarrantee that you'll find them all. i loved it nonetheless can't wait for chapter four izzie |
| telepop 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseGreat story for this chapter. Grammar errors like always but that doesn't matter the story was incredible. Just work on some errors and can you please make it a tad bit longer? Im not commanding you to. The longer the better. So what if the chapter takes forever to update it'll be worth the wait. :) |