amazing. simply amazing.

The scalping gave me the creepy crawlies. The gonna-pass-out creepies. Ick.

Great ending. I enjoy the publicly criminalized uke crazy blah blah blah stories. And Steart killing him at the end was a nice detail. I kind of wanted Arturo to kill David at the end...

Lovely lovely story.

Would have liked one last bit of smut (or something similar), but eh, kissing/fucking someone when you're dying? I suppose that isn't really realistic.

Was the 'but it w' supposed to be like that? 'cause, clever. :) A tad annoying, but still clever.

Can't wait for whatever you write next.

Get them while they're relevant. :D Haha. I swear they really do sell those at Wal-mart.

you are twisted and i love it

awesome as usual. I love Chance. He's so psychotic and perverse and it's amazing.

"I learned how to act and walk like a proper bitch in less than two hours. I was ready."

BEST line. XD

Oh you're killing me. What are they having him do! (Wait...or who? :/)

“I… I like candy, not because of the sugar, but because I like stuff in my mouth, you know?”

That was just too good.

Same with this:

Instant pedo-smiles, on sale, Wal Mart, aisle seven. Get them while they’re relevant.

He makes a good little whore.

Can't wait for the next update.

*cough* ew. but yeah, as long as the uke doesn't die i'm fine.
woot Chance!

bro...bro...damn. this is scary and erotic and incredibly different but then that doesn't surprise me. lol. :] i LIKE it, but it's still slitely scary. good job tho. i like different and u always supply it, albeit inconsistently. thanx.

is this a one-shot or what? cuz if it is, it shudn't be since there's too many loose ends. k, i'm done! biya!

X's,
-E

I love this. Fucking... I love it. This chapter is filled with so much excitement and it just sucked me in. SUCKED ME IN. I have goosebumps.

"I loved stabbing people. In the dark night, if you were stupid enough to be wandering around on an isolated street, I’d just walk up to them, and stab them, twisting the knife around, repeating the act multiple times like the knife was my cock and their flesh was some exotic virgin cunt. "

That is the most fucking AMAZING description of someone being murdered I have ever read. Holy god... XD I feel so sick and twisted. But I love it! I love how Chance doesn't give a shit at all that he's fucking an old guy even though he's so young. How he killed his brother and why he did it - just awesome. I'm already completely and utterly addicted to this.

Fucking brilliant.

As usual your story's plot is something new and refreshing (not to mention hot).

Can't wait for more.

Oh and killer last line.

Ah, I love it! I can't wait for more. Is this the one you were talking about writing to overcome your dislike of m-preg?

beautiful!

oher.
intriguing.
I looking forward to this one ^_^
- Sy

OO! A True born sadist! Chance might be the reincarnation of Marque de Sade himself. Great new interesting story! ^^ I Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!