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| ForeverxDreaming 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis was pretty good... the second and third stanzas didn't make sense, though. Maybe edit it a little. -Dreamer p.s. sorry if I'm too critical, but I really just try to help people get their writing better. |
| iloveanimecartoons 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was so true to life. A wonderful free verse indeed! |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOut of all your poems I think this is my favorite... :) ~Music |