 Moonpig123 2008-09-19 . chapter 1**! That is one cool chapter. Those skinhead bigots got what they deserved. I like your writing style and the character of The Sentencer is cool (I can see your love of The Punisher) but the layout is a bit weird, with all the writing pushed to the far left side of the screen. Also, paragaph breaks or even separated subtitles stating when a new scene is starting would make the story easier to follow, rather than just continuing onto the next line. I had to catch myself a couple of times, like "Oh, it's a new scene now? Right."
Overall, though, good work! Those Aryan Nazi monkeys have it coming to 'em... |
 Tears of Deathwishxxx 2008-01-15 . chapter 7Impressive as hell. Makes me want to start my new story NOW! |
 Tears of Deathwishxxx 2008-01-15 . chapter 5Bring the pain, BLAKK. Bring the pain to those Neo-Nazi bastards! |
 Tears of Deathwishxxx 2008-01-15 . chapter 4"All of you here share the same brain and you got to keep it today."
Abso-**'-lutely priceless, BLAKK. I like the extremely graphic scenes of violence. Top of the **' line, dude. Keep it up. |
 Tears of Deathwishxxx 2008-01-15 . chapter 1The Snypa is also black, like his creator.
Review: Sweet mother of Jesus! This huge monster of a coon(LOL, I had to say it!)is delivering true justice as always! But the guys that remain alive live to tell people about the Sentencer coming to pass judgment on those who deserve it.
Keep up the phenomenal work, BLAKK. I have a new idea for my next Snypa story. However, Damijin Spade is not the first Snypa, but he does not know that. He is the second Snypa. His grandfather is the first Snypa...Spade's old man died in a fire, as you may already know. It's gonna be based on Damijin's grandfather Darren Spade. |
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