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Reviews For: Snap Shot Memories

melbell
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abusethis is my absolute favorite thing that youve ever written that ive ever read [so far]
amazing.
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseDon't delete it, please, it was totally different from anything you've written or anything I've read. The snapshot idea was incredibly unique and eye-catching.

-stix-
simpleplan13
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI'm lying on your stomache.. stomach

I like the idea of ending each stanza with click and the whole idea of hte photo... the piece flowed well... the ending part thought was kinda disconnected from the rest though.. other than that nice job
maximusrexmundi
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseNO! dont delete it, it was great! lol I know that is nothing coming from me, but really it WAS good.
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