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| Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-09-29 ch 1, | abuseShort but sweet and very insightive! |
| StrawberryPanpancake 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseMaybe Innocence is really being Guilt for not knowing the Lies people tell everyday. This poem really has alot to say in such few words. I think this was well done. It was deep into thinking of what Innocence really is. |
| Sakura Kinomoto 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was good though a little confusing. |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseYour reflection reveals the truth. Good concept here. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI've always liked this poem. I like your description of innocence and your symbolism with the mirror. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseGood question and it is true how we use innocence for a cover up of guilt. Keep it Up! |