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| NewWayOfLife. 2008-02-05 ch 3,  | abuseGr8 story so far, I would reveiw longer but I'm really BUSY at the moment. Nice piece of work- KEEP GOING!!:) |
| Takhisis 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseNice story, but it doesn't seem to be one suitable for kids. i say you put it in the adults section. |
| Krystal Watters 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't really a prologue. It's more like a summary that you would find at the back of a book. Prologues are like the short background you need before the action starts. A conversation between the mother, boyfriend, and father might work best here, or something else of your choosing. |