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| Melissa Norvell 2008-05-11 ch 12,  | abuseWow,it has been a while since I've seen an update out of you. This story is coming along nicely. I hope your next update is sooner! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-03-09 ch 11, | abuseWow...What a emotional chapter. Feelings really ran high at the end of this. I like chapters that can make you feel and you do a wonderful job at that. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-03-02 ch 10, | abuseA great update! I always enjoy reading your works and you have such a brilliant way of telling a story. I also like your original concepts. Great job! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-16 ch 9, | abuseThis was definitely a great story and I had to do a lot of catching up since my last read. I can't wait for another chapter and I await your next update! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis will definitely be intersting. I can't wait for another chapter. |
| XRenderS 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat an interesting outlook, I like the detail theres not eough writers that do that so its always nice to come accross ones that do. I'll log in on the next chapter, thank you for the review on my story that was very generous of you. |
| Snip2r 2008-01-31 ch 6, | abuseIt's certainly surreal, enough so to keep me interested. You should check the very beginning actually, there are some bits that are rather confusing. M... you have a very nice style and atmosphere going, but be careful about overdoing it... but it's been awhile since this place have an interesting story, and for that I thank you |
| lich king roxas 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abusegreat story. Hi i'm new could you get some people to read my story Dark crystal.You story Rocks! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-27 ch 5, | abuseApologies that are overdone do tend to lose their emotion. It just like telling someone you're sorry after they tell you that an apology would be nice. Great job with this chapter! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-25 ch 4, | abuseHere I am, reading stories when I should be updating my own >< I have a bad habit of doing things like this but I am tired and stressed out. I'm glad that I have stories like this to take my mind off of its current state. I look forward to another chapter. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuse*adds to faves list* I'm enjoying this so much that I've added it to my favorites list. You're work is absolutely stunning! Keep up the good work! |
| SeaOfCrimson 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...just...Wow...I-I don't know what to say... just...Wow... Okay, pulling myself together...THAT WAS AMAZING! Again I must say it, WOW! The words just flowed into sentences beautifully. Keep it up! WOW! Man, now I can't stop saying it! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseBeautifully written and very intriguing. I find myself becoming hooked on this and you have a talent for description! That's something that I don't see very often among writers here. Granted I've been here 7 years ^^; Do continue with this story! I'll be back for another review. Also, if you have free time or simply wish to, then you can read some of my works. |