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Chrisera Fitzman
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusereally cute
simpleplan13
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseThis piece is cute.. the whole fish thing is really great... I also like how you use sometime and someday.. thats nice

A few things...sometime is one word not to and you didn't end your quotation, which seems odd...

Other than that a really great short little piece.. nicely done

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Lurid Black
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseHehe good, its simple, but says alot in this short poem.
And like Katrina, you can rhyme in really short lines.
I say that a lot >_
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseAw! Love it, Buddy! Congrats on finally getting a fictionpress account! =D Keep writing ;)
--Ur cuz =)
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