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| Chrisera Fitzman 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusereally cute |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThis piece is cute.. the whole fish thing is really great... I also like how you use sometime and someday.. thats nice A few things...sometime is one word not to and you didn't end your quotation, which seems odd... Other than that a really great short little piece.. nicely done PS if youre bored today check out the review game's review marathon |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseHehe good, its simple, but says alot in this short poem. And like Katrina, you can rhyme in really short lines. I say that a lot >_ |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAw! Love it, Buddy! Congrats on finally getting a fictionpress account! =D Keep writing ;) --Ur cuz =) |