I like it. The word choice and the flow are wonderful. Cool idea.

Sounds very vampiric to me. Aah, vampires. *dreamy gaze*

Delicious words. It's "intoxicating" and rich - I love it! Where does the inspiration come from?

Where. On. Earth... does that come from?
lol

I have no idea what went through you, but it's great anyway! I liked it!^^ Keep up the good work, you need to write more!;)