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Reviews For: which star tonight

half-sketched.staccatos
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

Favorite lines:

Star light star bright,
Here is my prayer for tonight:
I'm counting on you
to get me through.

Innocence. You pull that voice off very well. :)

Ki o tsukete
~Shan~
simpleplan13
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuse‘til I past that test... passed

I like the idea of deciding who you are and the rhyming and flow are great.. nice peice
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseGREAT, as always! Love it! =)
--Ur cuz ;)
I.O.K.O
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseSimple.
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