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Emoting-again 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseThat was freaking amazing. No... seriously. Sounds like something out of my life lol. I dont know if that's good or bad...? Anyhow, loved it.
choc me 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseLOL!! That was great! Awesome!
risaisis 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abuseLMFAO! I LOVED IT! XP I just know my best friends (who are manga/anime FREAKSS XP) would enjoy this way more than I did! XPP That first part, the "He was so unbelievably, rapeably hot that I'd be more than willing to give him a good ravishing every hour, on the hour... ...But unfortunately, he didn't exist. Dammit. That just was not fair!", OMG! :P I can totally relate to that! And I don't even WATCHH or READD Anime/Manga all that often, lol :P BUt yeaa. I wish guys were like that in real life! XP Strawberry cake?? Teehee, I'll never look at strawberries the same way again! XP -xx
McQuinn 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuse"...But unfortunately, he didn't exist." My first reaction was all, "Whut! Crap. So not fair!" I stopped for a few seconds, and actually wondered where you were going with the story after that line. I was so convinced that she had had an imaginary friend who was "rapeably" hot, but understood she could never be with him. Then I read on... “La, la, la, la!” Um. Ha. That line makes me happy. Heh, she's obsessed with yaoi and, oh, the embarrassment of him finding out. :) "It means strawberry cake!" headdesk C'mon, brain! Let's think of something witty and sarcastic to say to the bastard. “I don't like you.”--bwahahaha. Uh, holy cow. This was sexy. I am so impressed by the way you're able to portray so much chemistry with this short a story, and with almost no physical interaction. I got an old romance movie vibe coming off of this. And the last few lines were perfect and made me all giggly inside. Hugs this story. Unfortunately, Aaron doesn't exist. :p
firestar267 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseshort but sweet, it made me laugh, i like it :)
PunK.cHEw.AsIAn 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseOkay, I am now a huge fan. 1st Those Who Struggle Always Drown, and now this? You are definitely a favorite :)
BluePillow75 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseCute^^ and funny ;P
Jestry 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseLOL. HAHAHAAHAHAHA. (:
mia5081 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseYou had to end THERE of all places? Though I have to say that that is an amazing last line...I want to know what Aaron would say to that! lol Good job :D ~Mia
Maria Regina 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseI am currently reading this at a time when I am supposed to be sleeping. Reading this has caused me to laugh (silently). To laugh very loudly (but silently). Because it is VERY funny. I have... absolutely no comment whatsoever other than, "Good Job"
MiffyDear 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseAhahaha! Yaoi and Strawberry cake! Brilliant for a one-shot! I love it!
Moonlit Promise 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuselol, for a one-shot that was pretty cute. And i hate one-shots. I like the idea of keeping myself "immersed" in something so I'm distracted from high school. But this was cute. :3 Strawberry cake. lol Very random, if you don't mind me saying. But to each is own. Or whatever they say. Haha.
Acts.of.Whimsy 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abuseGroup Aww! I like it very much. I can see my friend Sarah in this situation too. xD Very nice, very nice. ~Acts.of.Whimsy
Israeli-Izzy 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseRofl rofl rofl! Lol... You're writing style is hilarious. And this story was really random. And really sweet. It was randomly sweet. Randomly sweet strawberry cake. =] I love it!! ~Luv, Izzy
Caelynne. 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseHaha, this got me seriously laughing! I love your style of humour - in other words, write more!

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