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fatbird33 2008-10-22 . chapter 1
such a nice, pretty poem. liked the repetition of simplicity is... and i liked the line, "But mean them even more" i wasn't so stoked about the last line though. i mean it was all right, but i think it kind of ruined the flow of the poem. does that make sense? keep it up:)
Michelladora Moon 2008-01-15 . chapter 1
beautiful and true :)
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