 Griezula 2008-01-27 . chapter 1:O This story interests me. It's different than your other stories. Milo in really... Well, I'm not sure what he is. Different? Yeah. Different. In a good way. |
 magalina 2008-01-24 . chapter 1XD really cute :DD |
 yayawhynot89 2008-01-16 . chapter 1hehe Cute |
 Pinocchio 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Awesome, and a totally different style of what I've read so far up here. Great job! |
 Andy Anderson 2008-01-15 . chapter 1I like it. Very well-written and flows easily. The only problem in my opinion is his reasoning for wanting to get to know Milo; it just seems to slide too easily for my taste. But otherwise, wonderful story. It reminds me of the manga series "Fake". |