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| ForeverxDreaming 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI think we all feel like this at one point or another, sadly! -Dreamer |
| jenny1000 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abusewow, this is really good. i can definitely relate to it - you describe it perfectly. i like the rhyming too. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow such emotion in this poem! Love the wording, and the rhyming! The detail in this poem makes you feel like you are in that situation, feeling those emotions. Well done! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| End-of-forever 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseExactly! This was very, very well done. That feeling of just beating your head against a brick wall of indifference is pretty familiar. It always surprises me when I can't get people to like me...I mean, we're both people, so there should be a connection right there, but it often feels like I'm a totally different species. |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseVery sad but I can definitely relate to this. I know the feeling of invisibility, some people think its a superpower but it's not necessarily one that I would choose. Good luck with everything, I'm sorry you feel this too. I really like the rhyme scheme that this has, it's very well written. Everything I've read of yours is really great. :) |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's how I feel a lot of the time. Very good. |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was so... real! I hope that's not based on real-life happenings. But the way you worded it was... Exquisite! Very nice work, very nice. Keep writing! |