Hey, this sounds like the Jabberwocky! I love it. It's very well written.

This is incredible! The imagery is so vivid, and the use of meter is wonderful!

It was very cute. :] I liked it.

Hmm. For some odd reason, this reminded me of The Lady of Shalott...I don't know if you read poetry or not, but if you DO, and haven't read that, you should. Something about a girl siting by her window. Anyway, this is beautiful. She reminds me of me, sitting at her window at night, writing poetry. Except for the 'head of golden hair' bit. Well done!

Wow, incredible. Its a topic not many people could write about well, but you did an amazing job. A testament to a great poet! I love the descriptions in it. Very nice work.