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| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful! I love how you change from just wishing to tring and doing for your self! A very powerfyl piece you have written! Very nice flow to it also! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Unknown Survivor 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseAnother good piece here. It really made me stop and think. Nice job. ~Unknown Survivor~ |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is really empowering. I like how it starts with wishing but then turns into acting instead of waiting around for something that might never happened. I'm definitely going to read this the next time I'm feeling sad and like happiness is unattainable. Keep it up, your writing is great. ~peace |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was powerful. I really like it. ~kiwi-kiwi |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI can see why you read that on your "cloudy days". I love the transition from wishing to trying. very nice. I like it! Very descriptive and real. Good job! |