I loved it. Pulp action at its finest. :D I particularly liked the scene where the ninjas came crashing in and Sentencer, Mika, and Josie went balls to the wall repelling the attack. I could see it clearly in my head. Excellent story, my friend.

I continue to be impressed.

Explain to me why Mokori was allowed to live. Was this one of those "I'll make you suffer until you wish you were dead moments?" But other than that, WOW. Awesome story!

Someone must really want these things to be steered cleared from.