Nice poem, I'll be posting a play soon so keep an eyes out for. Thanks and again nice

Very good. I enjoyed it very good.

-Flare

konban wa

T'is good. :) You had one typo in there, but it happens to the best of us. *shrug*

The half-rhymes threw me off, though, where sometimes the stanzas rhymed and sometimes it didn't. You should have either all rhyme or none in my opinion. But, like I said, it's my opinion.

Anyway, like I said: very nice poem. :) Is it from something that happened to you? Did someone do something to you?

Zaijen

-Shan-

cool this is really good

Good job, I like this a lot. It's true for me. Keep writing!

Anna _