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| The Masta Writa 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseI really, really like this one. You present something beautiful, and then you give it a twist. It's interesting. |
| Basara 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abusea shatter... how we live a life... nice... |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and capturing, you have a way with words! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting and spiritual...I like the images that my mind conjures while reading this. A human mind. Very weel written haiku. -C.N |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and representative of the human condition. MD:77. |
| kloun doll 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseeverybody needs a nice place to think... its a good poem with nice imagery. |