Yet again another good analogy, you're really on a roll lately. I feel bad for what happened to you but at the same time it only makes you wiser and stronger you know?

oh, really neat and i found this somewhat mysterious. nice job, keep writing! :D

Not gonna say I don't feel the exact same way, even 7 months after love. I guess there is no "after" when you're talking about love. I like the metaphor, it fits well.

wow. I really loved this piece. I'm fav-ing it. Great job.

Faith

Good work. I like the title a lot.

-Flare

but the aftertaste is what will never go away.

(and after(maths)tastes are never lovely.)

i seriously loved that! that was my favorite line

good work!]

konnichi wa

"But the only memory in the end that you have of the chocolate is your brown-colored fingers and your new cavity" - ah, such a heartbreaking statement!

"after(maths)tastes"

Both were two favorites of mine. :D I love your poetry - as usual. *wistful sigh* You're amazing.

Zaijen

-Shan-