I've been thinking this for a while now, but... whatever it is, it's under Duchess Blurose's hat, isn't it?

That was so amazing!! You just totally made my night with this little treasure. :3 I was a little "ehh" about the first few chapters, but once the plot got moving I fell in love. I loved the nicknames, by the way. It was so adorable how that random mumble of "pretty mage" turned into Oren's nickname for the whole story, and Joshua's with "handsome prince." I just loved it. I thought it was interesting, original, well-plotted, and just downright adorable and sweet. ^-^ My writing usually tends to lean towards darker and more serious no matter how hard I try, so I love it when people can pull of sweet and well-written. I just completely forgot time existed for the last 2 hours while I was reading this. And now I have to go to bed, but I really just adored this. Congradulations, this was the first real story I've read on this website, and I just loved it completely. I loved Oren and Joshua, and I really can't write anymore now because the screen keeps moving up and down every time I type a letter and it's making me dizzy and liable to make spelling errors. :D

This story is friggen adorable and I heart, heart, HEART it. I also love the clever magic system you came up with -- it is so understandable, and so fascinating, and so very awesome as a little side detail to the FABULOUS LOVESTORY ADVENTURE THAT THIS STORY IS. (omg)

And now I have to go run through your other fiction and blow off my homework for a while longer because you are BRILLIANT. And your fiction is AWESOME. AND I HEART YOU FOR IT

Mah favourite character is PRINCE ALLEN.

He's so clever and loyal and faithful and he'll put everything to rights, I'm sure.

haha, ok you really are wonderfull!
but to make something disapear?
i'd probarbly be difficult and use yellow; and sortof use time and senses to create a nonexistend timeloop... so that that object only exist in a alternative time...
is that too complicated?

love the story! ^^

Such a wonderful read XDD
I'm so glad i came across it :D

After Oren "ate" the Duchess's magic, he still couldn't make a fourth color? I was so sure that her magic would be that last final bit needed.

so good...but i have a question well more of a almost guess, if it is the dutchess would her rainbow ball be under her very large hats or is the duke the mage and cast the spell at one point you dont have to tell i am just curious is all...i so love your writting

You know, I started reading this story a little while ago and didn't like it, but then I forgot the name, the description sounded okay, and I started reading and LOVED it! Read the entire thing in less than a day, in between school and sleep.
Well, I remember a couple of the questions, and the Colour ones are interesting, so I'll give it a shot!

To make something vanish: I'd use either Blue and Red or Blue and Yellow. Blue on both cases for the property of 'things unseen', which you could obviously twist to make in invisible. Yellow is to deal with the sense, so you could easily make it feel like, taste like, smell like and sound like just another piece of air.
Red deals with the physical world, so you could also use that combination to make it disappear from the physical plane of existence, though I have no idea how you'd get it back...

As for choosing a fourth Colour, I'd probably have to go with Purple. I don't really like plants, and though creating things would be very useful, I'm ever the caring person, and healing would be a wonderful gift to me.

Oh, and another thing I'd like to mention is how wonderfully original the magic system is. People these days seem to be sticking with bodily energy as a power source, and muttered words and phrases. It's annoying, and it's wonderful to see stories like yours with such creativity. Makes me want to refine my magic system a little bit more.

Anyway, wonderful story! Now I'm off to read some others of yours.

gosh, i'm slow. She's hiding it all under her hat... isn't that some old saying? er, nevermind. And she did something to his reins, maybe *suspicious, suspicious*. I hope that whatever happens, Oren isn't blamed... that would be sad. But maybe i'm reading too much into it.

I really enjoyed your story. The only thing I could suggest if you plan to edit later, maybe show the development of their physical relationship better in the beginning. You are obvioulsly very good with the smut. That last chapter was very well done and didn't have any of the standard cliche's.

I loved this. It was a very nice little journey you took me on. Thank you ever so much ^_^

Allanasha Ke Kiri

The magic explanation was long enough to be understandable, but short enough that not to be an info dump. Good job.

5:"steal muscles" steel

6:"want to loose you" lose, unless you mean set him free.

7: Joshua! How could you forget so quickly? But she is his mother.

It took me seven tries to get to chapter 10. FP is being so forbidding, it's like dealing with a toddler's "no"s.

10: Joshua's taller because when they were both standing he nibbled Oren's ear, which he couldn't have done unless he was at least a bit taller or on his tip toes.

12: Allen is his highness not "his majesty". Only the sovereign and spouse are majesty, princes are highness, aren't they?

14: Come on Oren, get a clue.

So cute.

Thank you for this story, I loved it. Joshua and Oren are really cute together and the plot was good (a tiny bit too abvious maybe but the reactions of the characters are sometimes more interesting than finding the twist).

Loved