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The Local Loon 2008-07-24 ch 18,	abuseThis is really good. Oh and I reviewed Black Fox under the name tragedy in the making. But it was me. I loved this. Oren is awesome. lol. I want to be in his fan club, Ha!
Marin 9 2008-04-26 ch 18,	abuseI just finished reading White Stag and I loved every chapter of it. But maybe a spin-off is a good idea? I think the princess needs a suitor now and, while Joshua is taken, there is an available prince about ..? :p
IntoTheLight 2008-04-22 ch 18,	abuseLe Gasp! i loved it. so amazing .so cute. so Oren. haha this was good!
Daydream Nation 2008-04-21 ch 18,	abuseoh my god oh my god oh my god. That was just too cute. I really like the story itself, the writing style, and the creativity. Colorful magical balls in huge hats? Who would've thought? ;D
Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-04-08 ch 18,	abuseI loved reading this story soo much! I always love slash fantasy, it's so much fun... Anyway... This served to be a great way to procrastinate from doing my homework and writing my own story... Ebil dutchess! MWahahhaha... Darn. It's finished though! sniffle May I recommend a sequel? I love these characters and you did such an amazing job with them babbles Anyway, great job and I'll go do the stuff I should have been doing, but wasn't doing. L0v3, P0!s0n
Starflowergem 2008-03-30 ch 14,	abuseyou said the dutchess wears a bit hat...and you also said that the rainbow the mage would use would be...huge...and Allen's guess is she's hiding it. Star guesses it's under that hat.
readmerant 2008-03-24 ch 18,	abuseNow I am tempted to shout "update" at you But I suppose I will settle for "aww that was soo cute" I really did enjoy it, it was adorible and lots of fun to read ;)
readmerant 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseLOVE seems good so far.
cobecat 2008-03-11 ch 18,	abuseAw, this was a very cute story. I would have liked some more explanation of how magic worked, because I found that that be the most original and interesting part, but for the most part the flow was good and the plot interesting. And I assure you I'm old enough to read it. ^_~
SiLlhe 2008-03-10 ch 18, anon.	abuseOmg, that was an awesome story! The ending twas cute. =D (I skipped the smutty part, though, since I'm not quite... into that stuff. But I'm sure it was well-written and detailed just like the rest of the story. xD) I hope you write more of these fairytale twist things when you get back! =)
frolic-horror 2008-03-08 ch 18,	abuseI was a little surprised that the King was okay with them being together. I really loved the fact that they all made fun of the licking :) Some stuff are left unresoved. I hope Allen isn't in love with the princess. Meybe he should get together with the mage comming to investigate or maybe the white stag is actually some kind of sexy and weird mage/shapeshifter and Allec tries to hunt him and they get together. :P
Ambriel 2008-03-08 ch 18,	abuseAww! It's over!! What a sweet ending! I wonder if either of them ever see the stag again. Thank you for finishing the story!! It was a great read! Good luck with RL!!
Li Kaida 2008-03-07 ch 18,	abuseNO! Its over! You will write another one right?right? Maybe a sequel?
jess 2008-03-07 ch 18, anon.	abuseaww he better marry joshua!!
x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-03-07 ch 18,	abuseCreepy stalker. Anyhow, you know no one's going to listen to that warning about the smut anyways, ja? Happy endings, yay...

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