|Reviews for White Stag|
| Rubadub 3/1/08 . chapter 16
Mwahahahahahaha! Finally Joshua is free to be sexy with Oren again OwO!
I lawled at the part where Joshua 'ate her rainbow.'
I really must say that I'm still in love with the magic system in this. Colors! It's just so creative :]!
I'm sad it's going to have to end soon though :[
But maybe now I'll finally know why it was so important that Joshua not kiss his mother 'cause I don't like feeling so dense about it xD
Lovely writing as always,
| JtheChosen1 3/1/08 . chapter 16
the duchess is crazy but why did she do it? money, power, fame? the list is endless!
| Vera Dicere 2/29/08 . chapter 15
yay chapter 15! i reread it, as requested and only found one little typo to point out! :)
here: he said. Stopping so quickly
just replace your period with a comma, and you're set! i know you had mentioned thinking there might be some rough patches still [although i didn't notice anything glaring] so if there's anything in particular that you'd like me to go over again, just say.
can't wait to see the last few chapters up! i'll read through the whole thing again when you're done and leave a proper review. ;)
| Ambriel 2/28/08 . chapter 15
Thank you for posting yet another lovely chapter!
However will we survive for 3 long months! D:
| x-princessa-temnoti-x 2/27/08 . chapter 15
Eww, that ugly hat.
| jess 2/27/08 . chapter 15
Well duh! lol
| Renae K 2/27/08 . chapter 15
Wonderful stuff! That kiss at the end was priceless. :D
If you don't get around to posting anymore before you go, have fun and come back as soon as you can-we'll miss you and this fic!
| SiLlhe 2/27/08 . chapter 15
Gaah, I can't wait till the next chapter! But I'll wait if I must. -nodnod- Glad to see that Oren's finally figured it out, though. It took him long enough. xD
We'll miss you in March and the next few months when you're gone!
| JtheChosen1 2/27/08 . chapter 15
OMG PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY B4 U GO "POOF!"
glad to Oren FINALLY figured it out! geez!
lol, gr8 stuff!
| SiLlhe 2/26/08 . chapter 14
Ebil hat! x3 I think you've made it quite obvious who the mage is by now, and where they're hiding their color...
...unless of course you're planning to trick us into some elaborate plan, and you expected us to assume these things. o.0 -shrug- Whether or not you HAVE tricked us, oh well. I just can't wait for the next update! D
| JtheChosen1 2/25/08 . chapter 14
LOL, this is an gr8 story! jeez ur such a good writer with everyone's individual personalities! i really like this, i cannot stress that enough!
that Duchess is EVIL! her hat is Hell itself! burn the witch!
| Kariz 2/25/08 . chapter 14
The Duchess is SO FREAKING ANNOYING.
Would someone please just grab her hat or something!
_ can't wait for next chapter.. it's so exciting! XP
| Wings of Fenrir 2/24/08 . chapter 14
Purple Green Blue and Red. I know I just somehow would end up with these...
I would rather have a common born who stays a common born and has a mage fall in love with him.
| jess 2/24/08 . chapter 14
Jeez he's so concerned with that hat and that evil woman why doesn't he just do some research
| Renae K 2/24/08 . chapter 14
I don't know why, but everything to do with Oren's braids made me stop in this chapter-as if it was something important. Hmm. Methinks I am is too fixated on the hair! (Well, it's nice hair, isn't it?)
Now on to hats. Are you going to pull a swifty and make it instead in her petticoat? (*g*)