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| The MS Excursion 2008-02-15 ch 1,  | abuse**, this was encouraging. Good job. |
| HipSafeDeadGrunge 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseYes, there's also life beyond this poem. It was terribly written. If you're going to be straight forward, you atleast have to set some standards for yourself. Like trying not to repeat the same word in the verse following the one before it. There are better ways to say "it's like dying without the sweet release" and try using some punctuation. |