|Reviews for the color of the night|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 2/13/08 . chapter 1
I like how you threw in an acrostic poem of sorts. It's nice to see you experimenting and changing things up a little. NIce job again.
| creepy kiss on tuesday 1/20/08 . chapter 1
I'm not sure what this particular poem meant to you, but it hit home for me. It reminded me of how many nights I couldn't sleep because I was so afraid of what would happen to me if I shut my eyes and gave up that last bit of control. I like it. And the acrostic stanza in the middle is a really nice touch. It didn't even feel forced.
| Faith Adeline 1/17/08 . chapter 1
very strong piece. I like it. Definitely an a in my book.
| Lurid Black 1/16/08 . chapter 1
Sweet, origional, having an acrostic poem near the end of the poem. Sweet line:
'black has never bothered me too much'.
Really well written, keep writing.
| Autumn Lace 1/16/08 . chapter 1
Good. I like what you did in the second to last stanza with the word falling. Really cool.
| Sophia Feros 1/16/08 . chapter 1
Sweet! Are you going to BK tomorrow after midterms?
I like this one. It's good. haha. yeah, good.
"of molecules within the air and the stars whose light
went out scream over my peaceful state."