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writing.life.2.4 2008-04-27 ch 19,	abusebad sammy! wow... nice decision on the gift... lol... can't wait to read more! great job!!
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-23 ch 18,	abuseaw, yay, they're all at peace. and i like keith so far, he's nice. (all tho i'm still a tam shipper.[tonyaxsam in case u didn't get it... lol. i'm known to always make couple names for fun. haha]) great job. like the chapter kind of tied up loose ends and i luv that he apologized for being a "cocky bastard." that was WAY overdue. lol
VolleyballGurl212 2008-04-20 ch 15,	abuseJust let me say that I thought this was going in a completely differend direction... Very good job so far with this story. I can't wait to see how it all plays out with Sam.
VolleyballGurl212 2008-04-20 ch 14,	abuseActually, your sonnet isn't bad at all...much, much better than I could do, but that's really not saying a lot. And happy late birthday!
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-18 ch 17,	abuseaw, i really like this. i like how things start to get back to normal and its still funny because i had reasoned with myself before i read this chapter about my own situation that i had to move on and i got a crush on this guy and stuf. and i just feel like things will get better with my old guy if new guys come along. which is like EXACtly wat this chapter was all about! strange... but great job!! don't like the short chapters as much as the long ones tho... keep it up!!
Jingy 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseI like it =] I think Keith is better than Sam =)
AMillionMilesTooClose 2008-04-17 ch 15,	abusehahahahahah NICE. :]
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-17 ch 15,	abuselmao u totally had me going i was like NO NO NO DONT DO IT. and then ur like... i told him to stop and i was like YES. THANK U. haha. great job, kind of short but no complaints. can't wait to read more!!
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-13 ch 14,	abusethat poem is so true. it really is. great job. kind of works how its added. mite've worked a tad better if it was inserted into the next chapter or the last one like when people put lyrics in. idk. this works too. nice poem! can't wait to read more! and happy birthday!! =]
Brown eyes Bold Lashes 2008-04-12 ch 14,	abuseThat is such a good sonnet! Love it!
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-11 ch 13,	abuseomg, i keep saying this but this sounds like sum of the SAME exact conversations i've had with my boy (and his best friend) its scaring the ** out of me. and sam is the freaking SAME as my boy and i even did teh whole space thing and things did get better. weird. great chapter! can't wait to read more!! u rlly r a great writer! this was rlly good!
KatieTheWriter 2008-04-11 ch 3,	abuseHa, fortunate freshman girl. Guys are so like that! LOL. !
KatieTheWriter 2008-04-11 ch 2,	abuseOh my gosh I already love this. The whole Bohemian Rhapsody singing thing. HAHA. It reminds me of Wayne's World. I love that this is somewhat based on a true story. That's so cool. I like the characters so far, I just want to know how she met them and whatnot. Good job! ~KatieTheWriter~
KatieTheWriter 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseOoh, good first chapter. I'd like a little more detail instead of just conversations, but I'm sure as it progresses you will do that. I'm intrigued, which is always good! I'm gonna read more! ~KatieTheWriter~
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-04 ch 12,	abusei know i've said it before, but i swear! this is the STORY OF MY LIFE. the SAME thing happened to me and this guy (pretty much, we were best friends and we were close enough to b dating but w/e) and now its 6 months and things are just getting a bit better. and HES THE LEAD IN MY SCHOOL MUSICAL. this is FREAKING me out. lol but enough about me. haha great job! awesome chapter i luv the whole thing about the divorced couple! lol can't wait to read more!!

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