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Reviews For: Moments in Time

Artemis Anderson 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abuseWow. And I thought the OTHER one was interesting! I love the description that was used in this. Great job!
Artemis Anderson 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. This one is quite interesting. Great job!
felicia13 2008-03-01 ch 2,	abuseWhat are you talking about? I don't anyone can misunderstand these. This is clearly a crazy kid who has a ghost for a girlfriend. And it's not even a real ghost! Just a fake one... I didn't understand that line "His doctor included." Does that mean his doctor's a fake ghost, too? Gasp. But, really. This was very sad and very romantic. I loved it, Dice. Write more of these, would you? They're very entertaining and it's a completely new look at the Romance genre. Excellent word, Friend. (ha! that was a reference to your other story ^^) Felicia.
truthordeal 2008-01-23 ch 2,	abuseOk, I'm not sure but I think that the twist of the second story is that he's insane, but refuses to be medicated? Or is there another twist to the story that I'm not getting here? I think that writing the first chapter in reverse like that was a great idea. It built up more suspense, and the last, or I guess the first line, was dripping with irony by the time someone read it. It was great. The second story was a bit more psychological, which is good, but like I said above, I'm not sure if I understood the entire point of it. In the end though, I wouldn't exactly call these stories romance stories. They're more thriller-based than anything I guess, but then again ^ I'm not sure if I understand the entire point of it. ~Truthordeal~
Georgianna 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseSO CREATIVE! Ah, LOVE it!
Jaijai18 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome, its backwards =)i loved the opening scene, m skull split apart yum the thing that can be improved is the mood after the dead bride was described, didn't live up to the opening scene...and the ending line is not as powerful as the story started. this is unique =)
felicia13 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseOh, it worked. Excellent job. I wasn't sure what you were going for there at the beginning (with the rain drops falling back up into the sky), but then I got it... and it's a really cool way to do this. Watching life on rewind. It's really nice and you can still get the gist of their conversation without actually reading it right-way forwards. Or backwards. However you want to call it. The end was so great. "He wondered what he would do if she rejected his proposal." It's got that ironic twist that I so love and it's... well, really great. Nice work here, Dice. Yeah. I liked it. +fav It's great to have you back. I'd forgotten how interesting you were. Felicia.

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