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| Translucently Opaque 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseFantastic. I really like this one. 'Grants you sorrow halfway back upon this journey.' Perfect. |
| felicia13 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abusePretty nice. It sounds like doubt, trying to turn back when you're almost done anyway. Horrible feeling, that. But a good representational jorio. *high five* Felicia. |