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| E 2008-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good story! give it another chapter or two plz it turns me on! |
| Rabid Pair of Jeans 2008-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseGreat! Sequel? :] |
| Kaerith 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseLove this! OMG, it's just wonderful! I like all the 3 main characters; you managed to give them each a personality and an indication of some of their struggles. One mistake I noticed was in the first section about Heath, you accidentally used the name "Braxton" when Heath got inspired to write the blurb. (Which is hilarious, btw. I read the summary last night and laughed for such a long time, but I had to wait until this morning to read the actual story, had to go to sleep and now I have to go to my volunteer job.) Anyways, this story was awesome and I am totally gonna be reading more of your work when I have the time! :) |
| Qui 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was an awsome story! But you called Heath 'Braxton' twice, which was a little confusing. |
| Kailum 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! Lexi is the cuutest ^^ |
| caitie crane 2008-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAHH! i love this story :] you should definitely write a sequel or something. PLEASE! if you could see me i would be on my knees pleading for you! :] hahaha but for real, i think it's great. the characters are amazing. much love, caitie crane |
| gummybaby 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet and amazing. I was surprised at how much I liked Lexi...I wasn't expecting to. And the boys have great chemistry. You did an awesome job, I could see this story continuing...hint, hint... |
| Princess of Lies 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseYou should totally continue this! I want to know more about Heath and Braxton's lovely lives! |
| Ambriel 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseOh I loved this!! It was so cute and sweet. I love how all the characters are portrayed. Lexi is really cute too in the way that she's naive and obvious but mature about her diagnostic. Heath's sweet nature hidden under bitterness is really adorable. It makes me wonder what made him that way. Braxton seems so uncertain and resigned about his life and his parents. Once he changes his mind he is surprisingly stubborn! Part of me is dying to know what happens after! |
| The Cruel Irony 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was.. amazing. I loved the inclusion of the OCD sister, Lexi - she adds just a bit more character to the story. I think you should definately continue this; please, for the love for God, PLEASE continue this. Great writing; I adored it. -Irony |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI like it! I would like to know what happens next even though it's "complete". Very Interesting. I would like to see how they live together and if they could resist each other. |
| QueenCasey 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis does not deserver to be just a one-shot thing! It is so good! You need to right more! I mean it just doesn't seem done nor do I want it to be! |
| Abby 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI let my subscription here expire because I was getting fed up with some of the garbage, so I hope this posts for you. This was quite good. Definitely worthy continuing. Cheers! |
| magalina 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very cute, too bad is a one shot D: It was really beautiful, loved it. |
| The youngen 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Loved every second of it. I love Lexi and how amazinly excepting she was. That and how Heath is a softie. If you're willing a next chapter would be greatly loved. |