(See if you can decode this) :O

And the group spent the night by the cliff-hanger. :O

Dawn reading Sane's head: "NO not another one!" "What do you mean?" "This is the third serious cliff hanger! I am sick of them"

"Don't worry the Author wouldn't hurt his readers with too many cliff hangers Dawn said: "He has a good record of keeping things right so far in that department."

"Yeah I guess your right I should just chill out as this world has good detail for such short chappies! LOL"

Here I modified this for you :)

“Just trust me,” I told them as I took the dog tag off and slipped it into my own shoe. They did as I told them. I explained my plan and they each agreed that is should work. At least, we all hoped it would work." "Unless they decide to pat us down in order to find out if we have the belongings of Strays" :D


2. Still I like the level of detail in this though it is a tad bit Mary Suish but nothing we can't handle right reviewers? :D

1. Good chapter and I LOVE the details so far of the immediate surrounding area.

2. I haven't found anything to answer question 2 of the last chapter. :(

3. I hope this doesn't turn into a Mary Sue as I saw how she can jump buildings perfecty and that worries me. No consequences to the magic system yet...

1. Good and detailed story I like that kind. :) :)

2. I am confused at the funcion of this world. I wish there was some sort of website to read bout this world and how it works so I can better understand her dillemia. ?

(I didn't read your profile perhaps it's there)

2. If I were in that position I probably would take the strays BACK to GW's house: Only if it's closer then the man she is suppose to bring the letter to or I would do as he says.

3. It's going to be easier said then done to bring Stray's to safety.

Wow, this is really good. Thanks for reviewing on Boom!, i apreciate your comment. You're a good writer too!

I like your story, and were it's going. hope to see more soon.

Y Hello thar'. (:
Great story, I daresay! Ugh. I've never been good with these review things, so we'll just slap a big old "intermediate" sign on me and I'll proceed with these idle ramblings.
OKAY! Interesting plotline, first and foremost, though I'm still trying to piece things together. Another reason for you to update. Soon.
My favorite character just /has/ to be Dawn! She's the feminine role in the story captured to a "T!"
Now, the only advice I can offer you, at the moment, is to add a bit more action. You have great articulation between characters, that's apparent!
SO. I'd better see some updatin' soon, hun. I -heart- this story and should you deprive me of it, I'll cry all night long.
Hope to see a new chapter soon!