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| MidnightRequiem 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseThe imagery is striking and uncomfortable...it sets a great mood. |
| fkldjsklafs 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagery! You know, its good to see GOOD writing on fictionpress. I was browsing around and starting to get disheartened until I saw this :) |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusepowerful images and the repeition is really great... nice piece |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI like your word choice and the imagery. I especially like the first two lines, they tied together really well. Keep it Up! |