id just like to say that if you need to, change roxannes cothing, i dont mind

in case you still need characters, heres one
Character name: Roxane Emora

Age: 17

Appearance: white bond, elbow-length straight hair, violet eyes, pretty, thin face. tall and skinny, wared dark skinny jeans tuccked into boots, white tank-top

Personality: roxanne is a fun-loving, hyper, bubbly girl with a darl side, shes in it for herself, and is to sneaky to be found out.

History: grew up with pro-rebelion parents, and learnd to fight, and to 'rebel', omly she will rebel againdt snything, rite or wrong

Side: rebelion, unless the other side has somthing to offer

What character does for living: her parents own a hotel.

*magic skills: can take, freez, change, or even controll someones power, which makes her dangearus. she cant, however, shield herself from this power freezing, and her power can be hard to controll and aim

Any thing that I forgot:
shes addicted to loli-pops, and any red-candy.

Character name: Paine

Age: 15

Appearance: (clothing, face, height, weight, hair, eyes, skin tone, any magic stuff that makes appearance different)She wears a long, black and velvet (hooded)robe that she wears when she is out and about in a crowded place or traveling in the dark of night so she wouldn't be seen. Wears a dark red, silky halter top and baggy, faded black capris. Her face is 'heart' shaped. She is 5'6''. Weighs 144 ibs(Body frame is an 'Hourglass' shape). Incredibly long, dark and purple hair that reaches down to her knees (Has bangs). Almond shaped eyes that change from blood red during the day and shimmering silver at night. Pale with a moderate tan. She wears a black-chained necklace with a mysterious color-changing sphere that contains MOST of her magical powers.(The sphere's color changes with her eye color at the same time.) Carries a Gothic (right-handed) sword.(Hides well under cloak.)

Personality: Likes to keep to herself. Dislikes annoying and stuck-up people who think they are the center of attention. Can be kind if approached correctly. A determined and bold fighter. Secretly enjoys to run off and explore towns, forests or other places during night or day. Is a funny and kind-hearted person if she knows the person(s) well.

History: At the age of 9, her parents died from a wizard, who used a water spell to kill them. After witnessing the scene, Paine ran off and lived her life between the streets of towns and the wilderness of the forests where life was harsh. As she aged however, she grew wiser and instead of hating the world, she learned to enjoy life more. She never had a friend so she can never make a conversation without stuttering, making her look shy and quiet. She fears water unless she is bathing or drinking it. If she is slashed sprayed oer etc. then she will start to freak out. She got her necklace from an old witch when she was 11 and she still doesn't know how to truly use it.

Side: Rebellion

What character does for living: Warrior mage. Fights against the other side because of the King and his unfair rule.

*magic skills: Harnesses the power of fire and darkness. Her necklace is the source of her magic and can be casted by a single thought. Power of darkness grows stronger during night. Power of fire grows stronger during day. Very skilled swordswoman. Still trying to unlock the mysteries of the necklace's power. Necklace can never be taken away or stolen since the witch enchanted it so it can never leave her neck no matter what.

Any thing that I forgot:(Problems) Every once a year, Paine must pray at least once to the old witch so she does not die. As the witch said. "I grant you this power not only through kindness, but for semi immortality. If you pray to me at least once a year, I will continue to live through my old age. If you do not, then I will die and so will you! Do not worry child. If I am murdered or poisoned then you won't die. ONLY of old age which will also be your demise! Hahahahaha!"

Love the story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter- update soon.

Good job with Aura- you got her personality perfectly. I've gotta feel bad for Hanrad though...

Character name: Lily

Age: 23

Appearance: (clothing, face, height, weight, hair, eyes, skin tone, any magic stuff that makes appearance different):

* Clothing: Outfit One: A long, flowing red dress for day wear, and occasionally a green traveling dress. Outfit Two: Black tunic, breeches, and knee high boots. She needs no cloak to keep her warm.

* Face: Cherub like

* Height: 5" 7'

* Weight: A woman never tells, but she's a healthy woman with a slender frame

* Hair: Long, thickly curled brown hair. It reaches the middle of her back.

* Eyes: Dark brown

* Skin Tone: Pale

Personality: Lily doesn't show her feelings, but when angry she will become violent and will smash or throw anything in sight.

History: Lily was a minor nobleman's daughter, before coming to King Groven's castle to be the lover of one of his personal guards. She fled the castle after her father was imprisoned for helping the rebels, and eventually joined the people her father helped.

Side: Rebellion, but she's still debating on leaving the rebels when the war is over.

What character does for living: Many still think Lily is still the lover of one of King Groven's guards - she has easy access to the castle (though she often has to kill those who recognize her) and is often used to get private information.

*magic skills: Sun magic user, but uses her power extremely rarely. Lily feels that she can't control it at all, and it... obviously shows.

Any thing that I forgot: Lily is unaware that one of the male rebels has a crush on her, but she doesn't return his feelings until she murders her former lover, a member of the king's personal guard.

Character name: Aura

Age: 14

Appearance: Clothing: Long, dark violet robes with long sleeves. Beneath these, she wears a purple vest, navy blue shirt, and leather pants. Face: She has one dark brown eye, the other one covered by a scar, which she conceals beneath her black hair. Height: 5' 8" Wt: 110? Skin tone: lightly tanned Magic stuff: Scar isn't magic, but it makes her stand out.

Personality: Quiet and very much an outsider. She fights her own battles, and will hardly talk, or listen to, anyone, except those she owes a debt to. She will remain loyal, so long as she doesn't feel used or cheated

History: Her mother and brother died of disease when she was very young. Her father forced her out of the house shortly after, leaving the scar as a reminder. Because of this, she is afraid to care about anyone.

Side: Rebellion

What character does for living: Mercenary; she works for the rebellion because the others tried to use her as a "puppet"

magic skills: Her magic is powerful- she harnesses fire during the day, water at night, using a silver staff with a crecent moon carved at the top, which she can use as a weopon in close combat.

AWESOME story plot by the way.

Character name: Lilli

Age: 11

Appearance: clothing: she wears a pair of very short shorts she made herself that are sky blue, a sky blue cloak with a hood, and a longsleeved tshirt shee made herslef that is also sky blue; face: she has wideset cerulean colored eyes, a small little nose, and a smart mouth; height: she is very short. Like people mistake her for a seven year old and she gets really **. weight: she is Ibs. cuz shes so small;Hair: is pinstrsaight and blond.eyes: are blue cerulean and wideset;
skin tone: she's pale; ne magc stuff that makes appearance different: nope.

Personality: she likes to insult people and throws fits when she doesn't get her way. She has a sharp mind but a sharper tongue that seems to get her in trouble a lot of time. She likes to run, so she usually outruns the people that want to kill her because she insults them XD.

History: her mom died thanks to the king, who was afraid of the telekinetic power she had. She also passed this on to Lilli. Her father had abandoned her years before that, so she lives around.

Side: her father was a Sickle Moon and her mother a Day Magic User so I'd say a bit of both

What character does for living: she's a petty thief

magic skills: average, but she's very skilled at telekinesis

Any thing that I forgot: she has a brother, who's a Sickle Moon. He looks like her, being her twin, but shes more powerful and he wears her outfit except for pants and he wears forest green. She's been looking for him because he went with their father. His name is Marcus and he has a lot of girlfriends. XD.

Thank you. My penName is B.E. Rupp if you need to further contact me.

for peat's sake, just use the sheet and make a charachter, SIMPLE!

Brainstorming.. I give kudos for those who can write stories, we all have to start somewhere. Keep it Up!