i wonder what is up with gabrielle's mom and dad?!

update again soon!

Good chapter. You are very good at figurative language and telling your story. Overall, nice job.

I love it, please write more.

You actually had me in tears with this chapter. It's just so sad to read about how they love each other, but they can't do anything about it because he's afraid of hurting her. I love it!

Honestly, I really do agree with you about the third person. I'm listening to 'Chemicals React' by Aly and AJ, and you won't believe how perfectly it fits! lol XD Great chapter--I could feel the emotions really well through the writing. You are truly effective in third person. Keep up the awesome work!

Cliffhanger! But good story.

This boy is utterly confusing. One moment he says he can't be near her and the next he's there on her bed like it's no big deal. He's a complete enigma to Ellie and me-boy is he cryptic.


Anyways, love the story!

yay!! can't wait to see what happens between Tristan and Gabrielle!

I'm glad that Tristan is back in her life, but it's sad that they're not together.
To be honest, I think that there needs to be a bit more about her being by herself or her being with him before he was a vampire, because I don't get the whole picture of them being in "Love" with each other.

Other than that, it's great.

Good job on this chapter! I like the fact that Gabrielle has spunk and argues back. Keep up the good work. ^-^

Another great story on this site! *puts a tally down* Well, that's a good way to start. I'm really into your story, and I hope you continue. Can't wait to see what happens next; I feel sorry for Tristan...it must be hard to be going through something like that. Keep up the good work!

..the movie was based on twilight?
...seducing her senseless?
lolol. nice.
that was a compliment by the way...
and i do not have a dirty mind, if you're wondering.
:P

i love this story! so interesting! can't wait to see what happens next! update again soon!

very interesting so far...I like this story...cant wait for more!!

love your story. update soon please.