love the style

'Throw Away
The Unsent
Notes And Postcards
In The Trash'

Love it.
Love the last part too. It seems tragic, in a way, and meaningful. I love how it ends.

this is very experimental! and take it as a compliment :D it's fantastic. the HATE part is my favourite, mainly because it's like a stair and it's something so simple, yet genius. I'd say "cute", but the meaning is not, hahah. any road, the rhymes are good too. I like it.

I love the title.. and the formatting is nice especially where you spell out hate in those four lines... great piece

Wow, I love how you formatted everything so the word "hate" stands out. Very inventive!

-Christine

konnichi wa

Favorite line: "Let Me Count / *(scream)* / The Ways" I don't even know why because it seems like such a normal line, but I loved it. Absolutely! :D And I loved the formatting. :)

Zaijen
-Shan-

You claim the formatting was strange, but I actually liked it. It was nice, different... almost like a song...

My only complaint was that it was too short, and lacking in climax. It seemed a little dull... It was a beautiful idea, and I applaud your courage, trying something new, but it could've been much better...
Also, you should work on organization a little better... It felt like a few ideas thrown together.

But those are just my thoughts. With a little work, this could be great.

It is a different type of formating but that just makes it all the more interesting. I really liked the ending stanza. Keep it Up!

interesting, i cant tell you what exactly, but there's something i like about this =)